I did not do the top piece or the outline coloring, and I couldn't figure how to show the left side since its pure white marble being illuminated heavily. I think the right side says enough. The spots where the outline is filled in should not be there, when I saved as a jpeg it did that for some reason.
Heres the included outline picture. Again the jpeg format messed up the lines.
The line work is very good on this. I like how you really emphasized the highlight. but it is almost as if that side of the object does not exist. Maybe making it a little darker then the page would help to keep the highlight and have some contrast from the page.
ReplyDeletenice, good shading. Maybe change the background color to apply some contrast.
ReplyDeleteto upgrade this asset, blend together your shadows on the white bulb part, finish the top part to the same quality as the white bulb part, add texture detail to the white marble, marble has veins of other colors going through it and that will help break up the large areas of same color and identify it as marble, break up the shading on the flat sides, even flat sides will had ranges of shadings on all its edges.
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